April 19, 2012

The Queen of Spades

This one is an adaptation of the Alexander Pushkin short story. I've updated the story to take place in modern times, but kept much of the core plot intact (for now).

A reserved soldier who never gambles hears a story while watching his company play cards. The story is of a beautiful woman, who 60 years ago lost a fortune at cards, then won it back with the help of a secret strategy. The next day the soldier is wounded by an IED; while in and out of consciousness, he is haunted by visions of the woman and her cards. 

Sent home to NY to recover, the soldier receives an invitation from a friend in the army (the same friend who told the story). The invitation is to a charity gala for fallen soldiers, hosted by the friend’s grandmother—the woman from the story. Each day before the gala, the soldier watches the estate from afar, haunted by the story of the old woman and her secret. The day before the gala he observes a young and beautiful housemaid through the window, and decides to seduce her in order to gain her confidence, and learn the old woman's strategy.

At the gala, the soldier is celebrated for his bravery. He charms the housemaid; they dance, and at the end of the night he slips her a letter. Over the coming weeks they engage in a growing love affair via secret letters. Eventually she arranges for him to sneak inside the estate late at night while she is away with the old woman, and wait in her room until she returns. When night arrives the soldier sneaks in, but instead hides in the old woman’s closet. When she arrives, he emerges intent on extracting her secret, but the sight of him frightens her to death. The housemaid witnesses the betrayal and is heartbroken.

The soldier attends the old woman’s funeral. The housemaid sees him there, and thinking he has come to reconcile, is destroyed when she realizes he has only come to see the old woman’s dead body. The soldier steps to her coffin and looks in; the old woman appears to wink at him. That night he is consumed by fever dreams of immense wealth, and visions of three blank cards. He awakes and is shocked to see the old woman, who tells him her secret on the condition he marries the housemaid.

Ignoring the old woman’s wishes, the soldier withdraws all his money from the bank and takes it to an underground, high stakes casino. There he wagers all his money on the strategy, three successive bets, against a champion gambler. He wins the first two bets, but loses the third. The losing card, the Queen of Spades, appears to wink at him like the old woman did. The loss of all his money, so suddenly and in such strange circumstances, drives the soldier insane.

Posted By KRANTZ at 10:19 PM

8 Comments

8 Comments:

FenderJaguar posted on April 20, 2012 at 00:30 AM

Tron3

do we ever learn where the secret strategy came from? did the old lady stop at just recovering losses, or did she go infinite? I feel like there should be more of a struggle within the soldier, like he means to seduce her but actually falls in love with her and has this dilemma. why doesn't he tell the housemaid and why isn't/wouldn't she down with finding out the strategy, and if so maybe the old woman isn't down with her betrayal so she puts the voodoowhammy on the soldier to spite the maid? this would work better if the maid was underpaid or close to a slave and the woman was like the grandmother in flowers in the attic. maybe the old woman went down to the crossroads and was lookin' to make a deal? man I would take this down the road of horror & poker haha.


KRANTZ posted on April 20, 2012 at 00:58 AM

Souljalion

we hear the story of the secret strategy, but we're never sure if it's really true or not. in the original story the maid is a servant--i think what's important is that there is a huge class difference between the two of them (and her and the soldier)

in the original story the soldier's character is reserved, ambitious, and described as having "the profile of a Napoleon and the soul of a Mephistopheles"

it definitely has elements of horror, it reads a little bit like a gothic fairy tale


KRANTZ posted on April 20, 2012 at 01:00 AM

Souljalion

not quite sure what the specific card game is in the original story, but it involves betting on a card to win money against the house, and her strategy is to play 3 specific winning cards in order. he becomes obsessed with learning which cards to play. maybe it's like war.


molotok posted on April 20, 2012 at 05:28 AM

Daria

2 Players pick a card each, then the banker deals cards one by one into 2 piles face up(Banker's pile and chalenger's pile). Who ever gets his card in his own pile first gets to win all the money wagered. Pure luck game.


QED42 posted on April 20, 2012 at 13:59 PM

Well

I'd think about using New Orleans as a setting rather than NY. New Orleans just seems to fit more with gambling, a hint of strange mysticism in the secret system and the idea of Southern social hierarcy fits a bit better with the class difference.


FenderJaguar posted on April 20, 2012 at 15:27 PM

Tron3

I'm thinking the old woman tells him the secret but it comes with a curse he didn't know about, then he has to play death HU to save himself! :D :D :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3gFIDiBq0E


FenderJaguar posted on April 20, 2012 at 15:29 PM

Tron3

oh and QED +1 New Orleans seems perfect.


KRANTZ posted on April 20, 2012 at 18:54 PM

Souljalion

New Orleans is a really good idea.


 

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