April 10, 2012

down to 4

I said I would choose 3/15 but I’m choosing 4: The Queen of Spades, F-box, Consciousness and Reality Show (they say to write what you know, amirite?). The next move is choosing the ONE, and to do that WE NEED MORE POWER! Or more specifically, we need the elements of story: characters, plot, theme, genre. To get there, we can look at what’s implied by the loglines and ask questions: Who is the story about? What is the main character striving for? How does he strive for it? What stands in his way? What is the tone of the story? What is ironic or surprising about the idea? What kinds of thematic material can be mined from it?

For example, let’s take the idea for F-box: “A brother and sister have lived their entire lives inside F-box, a virtual utopia. But suddenly F-box stops working and the siblings must fend for themselves in a cruel world.”
Character: a brother and sister. Well who is the main character? Why? How old are they, what are they like? What is their relationship like, what are their psychologies? What problems are they dealing with? Parents? Defining memories? What about other characters--allies, enemies? What are their relationships like with each other?
Plot: life in the virtual utopia, F-box stops working, encounter with a cruel world, survival in a cruel world. Lots to dig into: what is this virtual utopia? What does living inside it mean? Is it technology, is it a computer program like The Matrix, is it a physical place? What year does this take place, how many people live inside this thing? What is the “cruel world?” What happens to the characters in it? What do they learn, why do we care?
Theme: certainly elements of the Adam and Eve story here... but what else? What am I trying to say by telling this story? Theme is a point of view on a subject, something like unconditional love leads to happiness or insatiable ambition leads to destruction or gambling above your bankroll leads to crying and too many McDonalds chicken nuggets.
Genre: sci-fi, right? But is it thriller, drama, adventure, romance, comedy?

So we have to ask those kinds of questions--lots and lots of them for each idea--and try to answer them thoughtfully. Stories need great characters we can relate to. Plot is simply what these “real” people do, dramatized to keep the story moving swiftly. Genre gives us some rules to work with, and theme gives us a point of view to join everything together. Amazing characters are the holy grail of storytelling--if you have them, they make everything easier. The story nearly writes itself. So spoiler: I spend an ungodly (godly?) amount of time developing characters (more on that when we get down to the 1 idea we're going with).

Goal: by Monday, develop each idea into rough story sketches, each including a beginning, middle and end. Refine the loglines to deliver irony!, a compelling mental picture, a sense of tone, audience, and to clearly illustrate who the story is about, what he/she strives for, what’s in their way and how they approach the goal. I’ll be using some nifty Dramatica tools to help me do this, and be posting my progress daily.

Feel free to contribute ideas, feedback, criticism, and questions throughout. No question or idea is ever bad (I’m sure I will be posting my fair share of terrible ideas, stupid questions and shitty writing... don’t make me do it alone!)

Also, question I’ve been asking people lately: who are 3 of your favorite movie characters? Why?

Posted By KRANTZ at 09:23 PM

9 Comments

9 Comments:

FenderJaguar posted on April 11, 2012 at 00:52 AM

Tron3

1. The Dude from The Big Lebowski. The dude as a character is brilliantly oblivious and at peace with everything that's going on around him. I'll have to watch again to make sure I'm right on this but it seems like the only time he gets shaken is when he's pissed at Walter. Everything else he's confronted with from blow jobs for 1k to nihilists, jackie treehorn, all of it. Da Jesus. He's calm and has some subtle but hilarious thing to say. He's always repeating something he learns or hears earlier as well. I think often characters go through some hardship or thought changing experience that ultimately changes them, and the dude stays the same the whole way.

2. Alex DeLarge from A Clockwork Orange. He starts off as a playful criminal but he has depth and you have to appreciate his aggressively happy-go-lucky nature. He endures what the govt. thinks will change him and stop him from being a criminal, and in the end he's still himself. Whether or not he'll continue to act at the level he had previous to his treatment we don't know, but we do know that he's still the same guy from the beginning of the movie after all is said and done.

I guess so far I like these characters because they stay true to themselves through life's variance and they're funny/witty as well.

3. This is definitely left field but Thayer Mangeris from Teenage Dirtbag. I identify with the character as a sort of outcast in school with a crush on someone seemingly unattainable. He opens himself up, leaves himself vulnerable, in the hope that his love interest can admit that she loves him as well, but she never can, and well, if you haven't seen it, you should :) It's low budget, the sound and supporting cast is like B-Horror bad, but the movie is stronger than most blockbusters. I don't want to run spoilers so I'm done but yeah, I identify w/the character and being able to relate makes me bond with the movie to a point, it makes it easier for me to sink into it and take the journey with him kinda like bastian reading the neverending story in the school attic or w/e.


FenderJaguar posted on April 11, 2012 at 01:04 AM

Tron3

F-Box kind of reminds me of BioDome so if we're going that route we'd definitely want to eliminate or stay away from similarities to a point. Or have the F-Box itself have minimal time.

Idea: Maybe there's more than one F-Box, people are segregated somehow, and they all stop working. Only a handful of various escape and survive, so instead of being a brother/sister, maybe there's a group like in The Beniker Gang or Stand By Me.

I feel like if there's a cruel world for them to get stuck in, we should learn more about why they're in the box to begin with. Is it like Hunger Games where they're stuck in districts? Or is the world uninhabited and could be anything?

Maybe they're raised in the F-Boxes like cattle for the rich to feed on and use for various things (medical procedures if it's set in a time that those are necessary?)

We care because a lot of us can relate, either to having freedom/s restricted, to fear of and the inevitability of death, or just feeling stuck or lost with little comfort of what's to come.

It may be good to have it set in the future, but not too distant. I don't know if it works as a matrix/computer type situation, maybe the bodies are being cultivated for the brains of would-be immortals! ;o maybe F-Box and Consciousness get rolled into one! haha.

Just rambling, more rambling in the near future.


Steppin Razor posted on April 11, 2012 at 13:37 PM

Artshow4

Who made the F-Box and why? Or who put the brother and sister in it?
I kind of see it like that Jim Carrey movie where he lived his whole life on a tv set. Can't think of the name.


QED42 posted on April 11, 2012 at 14:32 PM

Well

Here are a few that spring to mind, not sure if they are my absolute favourites or not.

1. Ethan Edwards from The Searchers. This is about the only time John Wayne ever played a real character and provides an interesting and ambibuous character. Is the motivation for his obession with finding Debbie because he is a biggot or as is hinted that he might be her father?

2. Dean Keaton from The Usual Suspects. Particularly on your first viewing of the film you get the feeling that Keaton is a guy helplessly trying to escape the dark side of his nature but is slowly pulled back in.

3. Frank in Once Upon a Time in the West. How can you beat an entrance for a bad guy where the first thing he does is massacre a family? It also helps that Henry Fonda is cast against type for the part.


Steppin Razor posted on April 11, 2012 at 14:40 PM

Artshow4

For the theme, I like: you can't avoid reality forever, or what goes around comes around (like the Fbox people are the Eloi and the cruel world is the world of the morlocks)


MayContainNuts posted on April 11, 2012 at 22:26 PM

Eiger-north_face

Going into the F-Box would be interesting - someone slowly noticing that their football team all ways wins, card hits every time rather than just one time.

Sort of like the original version of the matrix that didn't hold because humans wouldn't accept it.

Could be really interesting themes on pleasure and pain and the existence of evil.

Check out this unrelated but cool short film when you get a chance: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4yBXIhB36g&feature=youtu.be


KRANTZ posted on April 12, 2012 at 00:45 AM

Souljalion

Some thoughts/ideas I had re: F-box:

--is it a prison, or is it a place people want to go to/live in?
--what if a virtual utopia became the best way for the government to control the people? how did they do this and why?
--what if it was a place you could only get to after you die? (combine idea w/ consciousness, so when you die you can "upload" into the utopia)
--what if the story is set in the super near future, like 2014 or 2015. what events could unfold (esp. political) over the next cpl years that could result in rapid, radical societal change?
--here's an idea: what if later this year the government tried to shut down the Internet? what if they failed, what if they succeeded? what if OWS escalated into a revolution? what would the US government do to continue existing and perpetuating war? what if Obama was put on trial by the American people for crimes against humanity, and what if that event precipitated a massive, authoritarian clamping down on freedoms?
--what if F-box was drugs? pumped in via the water supplies, or delivered to your door every morning. then one day they stopped coming.
--what if F-box was the future of Facebook?



MayContainNuts posted on April 12, 2012 at 01:04 AM

Eiger-north_face

http://www.nickbostrom.com/

http://io9.com/5799396/youre-living-in-a-computer-simulation-and-math-proves-it


KRANTZ posted on April 12, 2012 at 20:51 PM

Souljalion

@MayContainNuts will check out that short film next week, hotel Internet is awful for video atm


 

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